开学啦!来场直播庆祝一下吧丨晨读vol.4

屠屠英语2019-09-11 09:02:56


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按照我们第一季的惯例,今天是应该要直播的
但是屠屠老师近期周末比较忙
所以我们晨读的直播时间进行了调整
具体什么时候直播
我会在公众号提前告诉大家

今天我们还是进行晨读


那么今天晚上,我们会进行一场21考研直播
主要是给21考研的同学进行一个英语导学介绍
系统的讲一下要怎么开始我们的考研英语复习


21考研的同学
今晚21:00
我们微博/一直播见


时间:9月1日晚21:00
平台:微博/一直播@屠皓民老师







晨读素材


Directions:
Suppose you are going to study abroad and share an apartment with John, a local student. Write him an email to
1) tell him about your living habits, and
2) ask for advice about living there.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
 
【高分范文】
Dear John,

I am a Chinese student who will share an apartment with you during my study in your country. In order to develop a harmonious living atmosphere, I am writing this letter to tell you about my living habits and ask for some advices about living there.

To begin with, I maintain a regular living schedule: I usually get up at six o’clock in the morning and go to bed at 10 o’clock at night. In the meanwhile, I like to study quietly at home during my spare time, without others disturbing me. To continue, I prefer a clean and tidy living environment, cleaning the room thoroughly once per week.

I wonder if my living habits would bring you some inconveniences. So I am looking forward to your advices for my living there. Thank you for your kindness in advance.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming



课代表笔记


接下来看我们昨天的这封书信。


那么这封书信的话呢,要特别当心,它属于询问信,你注意到题目当中有两个要点,第一个要点是,tell him about your living habits,告诉他,你的生活习惯。第二点是ask for advice about living there,询问一些建议。由于书信呢,受到了字数的限制,所以,并不需要把两点都展开。因此在写之前要先问自己,哪一点比较好写,这一点就成为你展开的一个关键。另一点的话,只要提到要点的话,老师就不可以扣分了。


这个地方,告诉别人,你的生活习惯似乎比较好写,对不对?而询问建议的话,无非就是一句话或两句话的问题。所以,今天作者选择了第一点的展开,而第二点只是提及。


因此,你看,文章第二段当中是不是说到了,To begin with, In the meanwhile,还有To continue。那当然,我们大家在自己写的时候呢,可以写成firstly、secondly、thirdly。而第二点的ask for advice,只是放到文章的第二段当中(划掉),第三段当中做了一个简单的提示。I am looking forward to your advices for my living there。就结束了。所以,它并没有落到要点,对不对?所以大家在写作文的时候,要自己学会去区分,那么哪个点是可以展开的,哪点可以带过。



课后作业


今天的课后作业

请大家模仿文章的第二段

写出你的生活习惯

也要注意我们提到的几个注意点哦


同时也别忘了
给这篇文章在看转发一条龙


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