细节问题务必要当心丨暑期晨读vol.24

屠屠英语2019-08-30 19:09:38


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在昨天的作业批改之前,有几点关于写作的问题想提醒各位同学,我发现很多同学都存在这些问题。大家务必要注意了,不要因为是一些小问题,就忽略。

提醒


作文练习时要注意:
1.一定要注意小问题,平时养成好习惯,避免犯标点符号,拼写错误等问题。
2.问句一定要用问号结尾。
3.不要把句子结构写得太过复杂,意思表达清楚为首要要求。
4.从句不可当作独立句使用;两个以上独立句不可仅以逗号连接,要么加并列连词,要么其中一个改用从句。 


01

1.Will you please是个问句哟,结尾用问号。 


02

1.Generally speaking 这一句没什么语法错误,但个别用词不准。建议改为:Generally speaking , you did offer us a good opportunity for practice.
2.Because ….去掉because, 因为它是引导从句的,但此句为独立句。 
3.Can you tell us …这是问句,结尾用问号。 
4.In order to be prepared 改为 so that we can make preparation in advance.  


03

1.Join the English corner at the first time 改为 participated in the ….for the first time last week. 
2.The service you offer here it 。it 改为is ; generally speaking 后加逗号
3.However后加逗号
4.Will you prolong the time we spend in English …这句话转为中文你发现问题了吗?你自己花的时间为什么需要别人去延长?可改为 prolong the time for English corner
5.In that many …去掉 in that [ in that 是用来引导从句的,但此处为独立句]
6.View it as great chances …发现有问题吗? It 是单数,chances为什么是复数呢?
7.If the subjects are told 本身没有错,但told 改为given会更好 


04

1.Most of students 改为 most students即可
2.Which give rise to the ….这句太别扭了,改为 so quite a number of English lovers miss the good chance . 
3.Inform us about ..改为 inform us of ….
4.Topic of interaction 去掉of interaction 
5.Because …这句改为because we do need more time for preparation


05

1.Will you please是个问句,记得用问号
2.Most of students用most students即可;另外,most..这句和后面it is ..这句都是两个独立句。在英语中,两个独立句不可仅以逗号连接。可加but. [但是此处还需要加上一句才能和上面的问题连贯起来,思考下怎么加吧。]
3.We want to the ….. 改为 We need to know the them / topic of the English corner to make preparation. 
4.If it is possible 去掉
5.We will …改为it will be highly appreciated. 



接上昨天的内容

开始今天的晨读
别忘了读熟、背诵哦


晨读素材


Dear citizens,    

I am writing this letter to you in an effort to urge you to stop smoking in public places as soon as possible.

It’s long been known that smoking endangers everyone’s mental and physical health. Smoking in public not only harms the smoker’s health but put others at risk. Smoking in public is an uncivilized behavior which should be banned. It is high time that we should quit smoking in public places.

We can breathe in clean air in public areas so long as smokers drive combined efforts to give up smoking there.


Yours faithfully
Li Ming


课代表笔记


首先请看到题目。
Directions: 
You are supposed to writing a letter to citizens to propose the ban of smoking in the public places. 你被建议写一封信,来干什么?来propose,来提议,the ban of,ban叫做禁止,吸烟,in the public places。


我们一起来看一下。


Dear citizens,    
I am writing this letter to you in an effort to urge you to stop smoking in public places as soon as possible.
首先上来第一段话呢,是一个写作目的,我写这封信,in an effort to,为了什么什么,相当于我们所说的in order to。urge to叫做敦促某人做某事,stop smoking in public places as soon as possible。


第二段,It’s long been known that,那么It’s long been known 这个's是has的意思,相当于说It has long been known,很长时间以来,众所周知,怎么样呢?smoking endangers everyone’s mental and physical health,那么吸烟,会伤害到每个人的mental and physical,就是身体和心理上的健康。


Smoking in public,这是一个动名词来做主语,not only...but,also可以省略,不仅会伤害到吸烟者的健康,也会put others at risk,也会把别人呢,放在一个危险的境地。


Smoking in public is an uncivilized behavior which should be banned.抽烟在公众场合其实是一个不文明的行为,后面有一个which引导的定语从句,这个行为应该被禁止。


It is high time that we should quit smoking in public places. It is high time后面可以接that句型,那句型当中的谓语动词应该用动词的过去时,或者是should do,也可以说成叫it It is high time that we quit,因为quit这个单词的过去式还是quit,那也可以用should quit,都可以。


最后一段话,We can breathe in clean air in public areas so long as smokers drive combined efforts to give up smoking there.我们可以呼吸到新鲜的空气,该尊重场合,只要我们的吸烟者drive combined efforts to,那么大家一起来推动,共同的努力,来放弃抽烟。


然后,Yours faithfully,Li Ming可以写成Yours,Li Ming,faithfully可以不写。



课后作业


今天的任务就是

读熟今天这篇作文

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